This story had a lot of potential but was let down by so many little things which finally resulted in a disappointing read. I tried really hard but couldn't get used to the third person present tense it was written in. Plus, so many of the secondary characters took up writing space that would have been best spent on developing the relationship between the protagonists (which ended up coming across as juvenile). I won't bother going into the inconsistencies in the story. It's not a bad book, but I was expecting much more depth.